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Death

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Isolated cloud on the peak,
Is it you that I seek?
Do you know have some sort of streak?
Oh, who is still meek?

A sharpened sword,
A twisted dagger,
Ready to strike at your word.
Who shall be struck will stagger.

Oh death, where is thy scythe?
Where are the souls you collected at the end of life?
Oh how mortals run for their lives for you.
But alas,in the end,we all say "adieu."
This is my first official art. Please tell me how it is and dont hate on this because I'll be accepting tips and on poetry writing.
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Menix11's avatar
The first two lines really captured my attention, then I was confused by the next two. Verses two and three seem perfectly fine, but to me, they are also detached from the first one - I don't see a clear 'bridge' that would hold them together. Overall, good work, though.